Wednesday, May 25, 2011
" A Very Short Story"
From this story, I can say that Luz tied him down too much because while he was in the Status, he was so lonely without Luz and any friends. However, he was trying to get a job and keeping her promise because he loved and trusted her. On the other hand, Luz couldn't be patient of the loneliness. I can understand how she missed him; however, she did make a mistake. Athough she told him the truth and how she felt, I don't think she was forgiven. I feel so sorry to him. If I were him, I can't stand that situation since I want to do what I want within common practice. In my opinion, keeping a long distnace relationship is very hard in general. If you are in that relationship, you are required a lot of effort to keep the relationship; for example, you have to call him/her regulary or have to get up early/stay up late to call them. I respect the people who have a long distance relationship :)
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Wow, beautiful semicolons!!! I gotta go write my respose, but I'm getting lazier... :(
ReplyDeleteI'm glad that you have interacted with the story as you have, Momoko! I also agree with you that long distance relationships are very hard work. Come to think of it, though, a partnership requires a lot of work anyway!
ReplyDeleteBy the way, here are a couple of minor corrections: "Status" > "States." Also, "If I were him, I couldn't have tolerated that situation...." Finally, as Hee-Jung noticed, you punctuated your sentences very well with lovely semicolons!